Score: 7

"Funny."

submission: Pencilmation #?

date: July 23, 2009

I think this short (never watched an episode before) really has some potential. But it's rather goofy and it feels like you're not planning on making it a tiny bit more serious.
The music was really silly and reminded me of Dora and the loop really started to annoy me after a certain period of time.

The background was really good though, but I don't think it'd be that fair to count that in my rating, although it shows you try to make the non-animated things as good as you can (including the pencil).

The overall animation was quite good, and it was funny. But the story was slowly dragging itself on, and after a few times of thinking "Could you just move
on?", the movie was ruined for me.

I believe I can see you enjoy animating these, and that's what counts.

Score: 8

"Great movie."

submission: The Transformer

date: July 23, 2009

This short little film really radiates the old, silent movie feel. Genially colored, with the sepia and all.

The music really has that old, classy style.
I did actually miss good humor, although the weird look at the gentleman's face, the fishbowl-ish effect, was pretty funny and greatly animated, I didn't laugh or even felt the smallest of what would be the urge to giggle.

Liked the music, liked the animation, but I missed the humor.
Too bad it's a staff submission.

Score: 3

"It sucked my cock hard."

submission: Box the Collector revised

date: July 6, 2009

Seriously:
A) It was a direct copy of Emanuele Feronato's tutorial.
B) The music was buggy and replayed every time I went back to the main menu.
C) There are no highscores.
D) The movement was choppy, slow.
E) You made every text a dynamic one?
F) My score remains when there's a new game.

Sorry, but this game was really bad. Improve on the things I named.

Score: 6

"Not really good :("

submission: Makeshift's Newgrounds

date: June 14, 2009

This dissapointed me. The graphics didn't match the video and there was almost no animation in it. Also, why didn't you do the voice yourself, it's you we're talking about, right?

Score: 8

"Cool."

submission: D-Day Defender

date: June 12, 2009

Very good. It somewhat has the feel of D-Day to it, the animation was realistic and the inaccuracy of the gun was a pain in the ass.
It got repetitive after a while, though. But it's an endurance game, so it should.
It also was quite unique how the game was very wide, yet very small. The daily 3rd place was really deserved.
I could clearly see the effort you put into this. I can also see some very good reasons for Tom to allow you to use medals.

Congrats with having your dream fulfilled.

Score: 7

"Interesting."

submission: Lasso

date: June 11, 2009

I'm sorry to tell you that I was annoyed by the short tail. Good graphics, good concept, just the tail is too short.

Altough I know it's not really allowed, Lasso, this game does not link to another website to play the game.

Score: 7

"Finally..."

submission: _SpaceBall_

date: June 10, 2009

You submitted something. I noticed you posted this in the Flash Reg lounge before, the line from the ball to the centre was an improvement. Popsticle is not popsticol, though ;)

The music kinda fits in and the graphics are alright, but could've been better.

Score: 7

"Originality pl0x."

submission: Mouse Adventures 3

date: June 9, 2009

The mouse avoider has been done. Too much. I'd love to see you make something original. The levels were cool, though. A few more would've been great.

Nice that you put music in it, but I missed a mute button.

Score: 6

"Okay."

submission: Chrome Invaders

date: June 9, 2009

I can't say I enjoyed it. The idea's been done way too many times and there were no extra features, I believe. The lack of instructions bothered me as well. At least tell us which button we use to SHOOT (which is the spacebar). The graphics weren't stunning either, so I could only give this a 6.
SO:
Get your own idea;
Improve your graphics;
Add MUSIC!!!!!!!!!;
And add instructions.

Follow that and you'll get there ;)

Score: 6

"Hmmm..."

submission: Safe cracker

date: June 6, 2009

Well you shouldn't make all of your text dynamic text boxes. Also, try and make them non-selectable and make the WHOLE text visible. I could only see the top half.

Too bad you gave away all of the commands, though. Some originality would've helped as well, I like "Deliver that Fulp", but I like originality better.